Theme Fridays: i want

22 08 2008

 THEME FRIDAYS

 

This week’s theme is courtesy of our dear J.  i don’t think i need to elaborate any further than to say:

i want

It’s in the wiggling her little fingers, that vertical line one gets between his bushy eyebrows.
It is the rocking from foot to bare foot or almost imperceptible little bounce on the heel.
It’s a tantrum, a sulk, a poked out bottom lip.
Sometimes it spills out in tears, pleading, folded hands.
Sometimes it softly parts lips, causes slight salivation.

You know

It’s the shine of a new car, the name on the tag in that shirt, the zip code of a house.
It can be that one drink, one line, one cigarette, that one bowl of Cocoa Pebbles.
It can be the bulge of his bicep, the curve of her breasts, the weight of a wallet.

Power. Position. Prestige.

You know.

 

Or perhaps it is a feeling of warmth one hand creates in another.
Someone to say, ‘It’s okay.” Or, “I understand.” Or, “Come here.”
To be loved. To be known. That someone says your name.

The face of a flower. To laugh from one’s belly. To sing, to be comfortable with quiet. To love what is free.  Know what is needed, to know it intimately so as not to become lost in waste and the temporary- that which is easily taken away, broken, replaced.

i want…

What do you think Annie wants?
And J, what does she want?

(copyright 2008) c A Hughes
08.17.08


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7 responses

22 08 2008
maddyejames

Wow. You wrote from different perspectives seamlessly. Again, you did good christine!~

22 08 2008
writerchick

Hey Chica,
You know I love your writing – but how I love this. So simple and soft and real. I want those things too.
Love
Annie

22 08 2008
teeni

These are each well written and beautiful but I think they all basically boil down to the same wants really. Basic human wants. Kinda neat experiment you all did here.

24 08 2008
Caryn Caldwell

Oh, I like that so much. Beautiful, and such description!

27 08 2008
Simonne

Oh yes, this is beautiful.

5 09 2008
c

i am constantly struggling with i want versus i need.
i desire to be simple and pleased with simplicity- which i am, mostly. But sometimes, i want more, flashiness, convenience, those things that, in my opinion, are truly gnawing away at the decency of this world.

It’s soooo haaaaarrrrrd sometimes though!

Thank you all for reading and commenting. i appreciate and value your readership. i also apologize for being lazy by replying like this. Being gone has lead to a treasure trove of comments, so many that i didn’t want to begin to sound insincere or glib in individual replies. Things should get back to normal as far as posting, visiting your blogs and my replying stylee now that i am back and rested.

~c

12 10 2008
dbarber59

Very nice!

Dave Barber,
http://finepoetry.wordpress.com

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