me, sitting in church, age 7

12 10 2008

mother’s fingers pale
cold & biting

sit still

(copyright 2008 )  c A Hughes
10.12.08

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12 10 2008
dbarber59 (09:50:43) :

Very nice! I love writing poetry like this. It sets the stage and says a great deal in only a few words.

Dave
http://finepoetry.wordpress.com

12 10 2008
Red (20:42:05) :

*sigh*
But it’s so hard to sit still . . ants in the pants, I say.

i know! :)

~c

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